The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in autumn and spring. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in autumn and spring. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
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The present line chart compares the data about the usage of electricity in England in autumn and spring days.
In addition
, the pie graph illustrates the percentage of home averages used.
Overall
, in winter the English used electricity more than in winter, and in there heating has a large section.
According to
the line diagram, the UK inhabitants in winter have an enormous use. At the beginning of the day used 35000;
then
the amount decreased, so in 8 reached the minimum by nearly 30000. Later has increased slightly to touch the highest point in 22 by 48000.
However
, in summer at the start, the figure is 28000 after that the trend declines, yet in 13.5 we have peaked by roughly 20000,
then
have wave line, and in 24 the number is absolutely the same as in 0. The pie chart shows the massive section for heating by 52.2%;
moreover
, the Oven, kettle, and washing machine had the second level.
Furthermore
, the third ones are Light, TV, and radio which are equal to Vacuum cleaners, food mixers, and electric tools by 15%.
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