The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied thay were with their visit, during the same two periods.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied thay were with their visit, during the same two periods.
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The table illustrates how many tourists went to Ashdown
Museum
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in the previous
year
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and the latest
year
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when
this
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museum
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was renovated,
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the pie graphs compare the outcome of an analysis of visitor satisfaction with
this
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place during the same two periods.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the total number of visitors to Ashdown
Museum
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increased after it was refurbished. Meanwhile, the rate of visitor satisfaction witnessed an increase in the
year
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following refurbishment. As can be seen from the table, the sum of tourists who visited Ashdown
Museum
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stood at 74,000 during the
year
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before renewal.
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, the figure for holidaymakers experienced a rise of 18 thousand.
On the other hand
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, the percentage of dissatisfied and very disappointed guests accounted for half of the total surveys during the
year
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before it was repaired.
Whereas
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, the ratio of sightseers who were satisfied and very contented made up 75% during the
year
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after restoration.
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