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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
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The given bar chart represents the results of a survey about the purchases and drinking habits of
coffee
 and tea found in five major
cities
 in Australia indicated as a percentage.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that on average the majority of
aussies
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Aussies
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 went to a café for either
coffee
 or tea,
while
 that of those who bought a fresh
coffee
are
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were
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 the least in the
last
 4 weeks.
However
, it is interesting to note that only those who lived in Adelaide
seems
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seem
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 to
preferred
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prefer
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 instant
coffee
 slightly more than fresh
one
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ones
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.
To begin
 with, more than 55% of the residents in
australia
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Australia
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 went to a café at least once
in
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apply
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this
 month, except in Adelaide that less than 50%. It is obvious that Major
cities
 like Melbourne
and
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apply
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Sydney and Hobart ranked as
top
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the top
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 three
cities
that
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where
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it
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apply
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residents visited a cafe at above 60%.
However
, trends of those who purchased instant
coffee
 in every
cities
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city
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ranging
Wrong verb form
range
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 from 45-55%. In regards
with
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to
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,
Australia
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Australian
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 residents seem to be less favour in
fresh
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of fresh
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coffee
 at a percentage of lower than 45%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, cities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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