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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram illustrates the floor plan of Central Library 20 years ago and its appearance now.
Overall
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, the library underwent many significant changes and some new constructions. Having looked at the provided diagram more closely,
it is clear that
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 there are some new areas. The first one is the storytelling events area which is in the upper left
corner
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,
additionally
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, it includes two new sofas. In the bottom
right
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corner
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, there is a new cafe which replaces the enquiry
desk
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.
Moreover
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, three self-service machines are installed on the
right
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 side, next to the cafe. Relating to the transposition,
it is clear that
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 20 years ago, the CDs, videos, and computer games were in the upper left
corner
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,
however
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, it is now located in the bottom left
corner
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. The children's books were relocated from the upper
right
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corner
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 to the upper left
corner
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, which is in the storytelling events. The enquiry
desk
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 was transformed into an information
desk
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 which is located on the
right
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-hand side. Next to the information
desk
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 are adult fiction books whose old location was on the left.
Moreover
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, all reference books are on the left-hand side and there is a lecture room in the upper
right
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corner
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.
Furthermore
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, in the
center
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centre
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, tables and chairs were removed.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "it is clear that, moreover".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words corner, right, desk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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