The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
This
bar charts
Change the determiner
chart
depicts
variation in the international student enrolment Change the verb form
depict
in
Change preposition
at
Smithtown
University
, University
of Riverview
, and Earlwood
University
, Furthermore
, we can see four different countries ( India, Nepal, Vietnam, Indonesia, and Colombia ). in
addition, in Capitalize word
In
y-axis
from 0 to 8000 Correct article usage
the y-axis
students
.
At first glance, India had the most international students
enrolments
with 7500 in University
of Correct article usage
the University
Riverview
, Furthermore
, Nepal had around 5000 students
enrolments
in University
of Correct article usage
the University
Riverview
, In addition
, Vietnam had 3500 students
Enrolments
in
Change preposition
at
University
of Correct article usage
the University
Riverview
, However
, Indonesia and Colombia has
the same amount of Change the verb form
have
students
enrolments
in University
of Riverview
appromexilty 1000 students
.
In more detail, there is
7500 Correct subject-verb agreement
are
students
from India in
Change preposition
at
University
of Correct article usage
the University
Riverview
, 6000 students
in
Change preposition
at
Smithtown
University
, and 5000 Indian students
in
Change preposition
at
Earlwood
University
, Furthermore
, There is
5000 Change the verb form
are
enrolments
students
in
Change preposition
at
University
of Correct article usage
the University
Riverview
and Smithtown
University
and Earlwood
University
had the same amount Nepalian students
enrolments
, in Addition
, University
of Riverview
had 3500 enrolments
Nepalian students
with a slightly fewer students
in Earlwood
University
with 3000 enrolments
students
and Smithtown
University
had 2000 students
, on the other hand
, we can see Indonesia and Colombia had the lowest enrolments
students
in the three Universities.Submitted by aziz1dakhil on
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