The diagram below illustrates the recycling process of discarded glass bottles. Provide a summary of the information by mentioning the main features and make appropriate comparisons wherever relevant.
The diagram illustrates the recycling
process
of discarded Use synonyms
glass
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bottles
through various stages.
There are six main stages in the recycling Use synonyms
process
of Use synonyms
glass
, beginning with sorting used Use synonyms
glass
and ending with producing clear Use synonyms
glass
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bottles
.
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Initially
, used Linking Words
glass
is collected in a collection box before the Use synonyms
process
begins. In the first main stage of Use synonyms
glass
bottle production, the used Use synonyms
bottles
are segregated by rollers and workers. Use synonyms
Then
, they are moved to a machine and broken into small pieces. Linking Words
Following
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this
, the Linking Words
glass
is sorted using magnets and other tools.
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Next,
the sorted Linking Words
glass
is placed into a cullet melting bowl and melted at a high temperature, turning it into the raw material for new Use synonyms
glass
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bottles
. After that, the molten Use synonyms
glass
is shaped into Use synonyms
bottles
that can be used in daily life. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
bottles
become clear products, and the Use synonyms
process
starts again.Use synonyms
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