The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
This
bar chart depicts the origin of foreign students
(from India
, Nepal, Vietnam, Indonesia, and Colombia) at three universities (Smithtown
University
, University
of Riverview, and Earlwood
University
) in number of students
. At the
first Correct article usage
apply
sight
it seems that the Add a comma
sight,
University
of Riverview is the most popular university
trough all the students
(with the
7500 Correct article usage
apply
students
from India
, and decrease cradually
to 1300 Correct your spelling
gradually
students
from Colombia), and two others are dividing the second place depends
on Wrong verb form
depending
country
of origin of their Add an article
the country
students
.
We can divide those bars into 3 main groups: with the preference to
Change preposition
for
the
Correct article usage
apply
Smithtown
University
(India
), with the precedency to the
Correct article usage
apply
Earlwood
University
(Vietnam and Colombia), and two countries - Nepal and Indonesia - with the same number of the
Correct article usage
apply
students
in both Universities (Smithtown
and Eatrlwood).
Moreover
, we can highlight at
Change preposition
apply
India
as a
country with the Correct article usage
the
higher
number of Correct word choice
highest
the
Correct article usage
apply
students
, studying at
Change preposition
in
this
area - in total 18500 students
. In the
first place for them is the Change preposition
The
University
of Riverview with 7500 undergrads, in the last
place is the Earlwood
University
with 5000 students
.
Furthermore
, Colambia
is the country with the least amount of Correct your spelling
Colombia
Columbia
the
Correct article usage
apply
students
- 3000 in total. The minimal quantity have
enrolled Change the verb form
has
to
Change preposition
at
the
Correct article usage
apply
Smithtown
University
- less then
1000 undergrads.
Replace the word
than
To
the end, it's the similarity of choice between Nepalese and Indonesian Change preposition
In
students
- 4000 and 1000 respectively in
Change preposition
at
the
Correct article usage
apply
Smithtown
University
and the
Correct article usage
apply
Earlwood
University
.Submitted by anastasia on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, india, smithtown, university, earlwood with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
▼