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The process below shows the Human Resources (HR) recruitment process for a company. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram shows the steps involved in a company’s HR recruitment
process
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, it explains the
process
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 for
applications
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 and selection of a successful candidate. The first part of the
process
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 involves posting the
job
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 advertisement
andcollecting
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and collecting
applications
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. To do
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, the company creates a list of requirements for the
job
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 and
then
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 publishes these online. Those who want to apply for the
job
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then
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 need to download, complete, and submit the
job
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 application form. All of these
applications
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 are
then
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 assessed. In the next stage of the
process
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, the company chooses which
applications
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 will progress to the next stage. Those who are unsuccessful are sent an email notifying them of
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,
while
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 successful applicants are invited to attend an interview. After the interview, one successful candidate is chosen by the company
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 a runner-up. All other candidates are sent an email to tell them that they have not received the
job
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.
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, the winning candidate is offered the position.
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coherence cohesion
Consider using linking words and phrases more frequently to further enhance the flow of your essay.
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You might provide a bit more detail about certain steps, like what criteria are used to assess the applications or what the interview process entails.
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The essay provides a clear and comprehensive overview of the HR recruitment process.
coherence cohesion
The information is logically structured and the stages of the process are well-presented.
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Tasks and steps in the process are clearly explained, and specific actions such as postings, emails, and interviews are noted.

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