The diagram below show how hydro-electric power is generated.

The diagram below show how hydro-electric power is generated.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below show how hydro-electric power is generated.
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diagram illustrates the steps involved in the production of power from hydroelectricity.
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,
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process consists of three phases, the first phase takes place naturally, the second involves the use of a
turbine
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and the third phase occurs in the transformer station before being delivered for use.
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,
water
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from the sea evaporates in the presence of the sun.
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water
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vapour
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condenses to form clouds, later these clouds lose
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water
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in the form of rain. The released
water
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from the clouds is harvested in a reservoir which is controlled by a dam. With regard to the second stage, the collected
water
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passes through a valve which can be opened or closed
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the requirements, before being channelled through a
turbine
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. It is at
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point in the process
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hydroelectricity is generated.
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hydroelectricity is transferred to a transformer station via high-voltage cables. The
water
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used to turn the
turbine
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is returned to the reservoir by a pump. In the third phase, the energy produced by the
turbine
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is received by the transformer station which regulates the energy and transforms it into a useable form of electricity.
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, the newly generated electricity is distributed to houses, factories and hospitals or schools with the help of underground cables.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words turbine, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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