The pie charts and the table show the primary sources and the total amount of fish that transported into United States in the year 1988 to 2000.

The pie charts and the table show the primary sources and the total amount of fish that transported into United States in the year 1988 to 2000.
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The present pie charts and table compare data about the whole number of sources of fish which were transported to the USA in 3 different years (1988, 1992, and 2000).
Overall
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, the total value of dollars increased;
moreover
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,
firstly
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,
Canada
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was the main source, but in other years
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had a large section.
According to
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the chart, the figures for billion dollars which are spending on fish climbed because at the beginning the number was 6.57;
however
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, in 1992, and 2000 respectively 8.52 and 10.72. The pie graphs demonstrate in 1988, the first country that sent fish to the United States of America was
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at 60%;
then
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and China;
nevertheless
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, in 1992, we can see the alter
due to
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the fact that
Canada
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's percentage had 26% reduced, yet the proportion of
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and China had 20 and 7 per cent increased.
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, in 2000 had changed from 1992,
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and
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had 4% and 6% fell;
although
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, China's trend was the same as in 1992, and had a 10% rise.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, others with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • primary sources
  • import
  • export
  • sustainable
  • trade
  • volume
  • shifts
  • increase
  • decrease
  • prominent
  • exporters
  • fishery
  • market dynamics
  • trade agreements
  • conservation
  • supply chain
  • trend analysis
  • economic impact
  • fishing industry
  • environmental concerns
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