The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.
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The given map details Porth
Harbor
in the past and alterations made in the present day. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the
harbor
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has become more accessible through additional docking options, and transitioned generally from being used for commercial fishing and some private boating to a mostly recreational waterfront area. In the past, there was a single dock in the
norther
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section of the
harbor
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, just below a public beach stretching
further
northwards. At present, the beach remains the same but another dock serving passenger ferries has been added. Slightly south and west of the docks, there was previously a marina for private yachts, showers and toilets and a car park connected to the main road running north to south. The only change today is the marina has now been relocated to the immediate south. In the southwestern section of the
harbor
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, the marina (which replaced an open
harbor
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for fishing boats) is adjacent to new showers and toilets and a pre-existing second car park linked to the main road. On the eastern peninsula, the existing lifeboat and private beach are now accompanied by cafes and shops and a smaller road leading to a new hotel
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the furthest eastern point.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words harbor with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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