The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the results of a questionnaire conducted among residents in five Australian cities about their eating and drinking habits over the past four weeks.
Overall
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, the majority of people preferred going to a café
for drinking
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to drink
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coffee
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or tea in almost all cities except Adelaide,
while
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a smaller percentage of people opted for instant
coffee
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.
According to
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the survey, over half of the residents in Brisbane and Hobart bought fresh
coffee
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in the
last
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four weeks, with percentages of approximately 53% and 54%, respectively.
In contrast
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, the proportion of citizens buying instant
coffee
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in Brisbane and Adelaide was below 35% during
this
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period. The highest percentages of residents going to a café for
coffee
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or tea were observed in four out of the five cities.
In particular
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, Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart had percentages exceeding 60%.
In contrast
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, the figure for Adelaide remained below 50%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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