The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.
The line graphs
compares
the amount of local Change the verb form
compare
students
and students
from different countries entering the University of Australia for ten years.
Overall
, during this
ten-year period, local students
remained the biggest admission to the university, with overseas students
other
countries Change preposition
in other
entrance
much less on them.
It is seen that every year more and more people come to Australia, the arrivals from other countries showed rapid and stable growth from 20000 to 80000. In 2007 Replace the word
entering
Correct article usage
the reginal
reginal
Correct your spelling
regional
students
has
not budged in the chart for 4 years in 2001 Change the verb form
have
total
number Correct article usage
the total
400000
and Add a missing verb
was 400000
the
end Change preposition
at the
of
was Change preposition
apply
with
600000. The gap in receipts between Change preposition
apply
this
two statements had widened and considerably more Correct determiner usage
these
students
was
from Change the verb form
were
native
Add an article
the native
state
than Fix the agreement mistake
states
in
abroad Change preposition
apply
students
.
As can be seen from the diagram, the amount of incoming increased in all two graphs but rose stable in ten years the most dramatically acrooss
the border Correct your spelling
across
students
. The period between 2001 and 2010 saw a sharp growth and in 2007 the Austrians to times more as they did in 2001Submitted by dnm.best on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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