The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county. Three counties that incresed in population between 1940 and 2000, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington had shown the different increasing.

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The line chart gives data about the population in the state of Oregon by country y. Three countries ies that

rised

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in population from 1940 to 2000. all the data are measured in thousands

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, it is clear from the chart that

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Washington has

different

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pattern and over the period

its

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dramatically increased. On the opposite, the

Yamhill

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and the Columbia have the same pattern over the period with a slight change. it can be observed that

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that

Washington is the

most

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apply

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country with

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the highest

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population growth at 75

thousands

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in 1994, nearly to 135

thousand

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in 1970 and mostly with 240

thousand

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in 2000.

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what is shown, the

Yamhill

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and the Columbia reached the same point with 30

thounsand

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thousand

in 1940.

in addition

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, the

Yamhill

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achieved a slight increase with 45

thousand

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in 1970

while

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the Coulmbia achieved 30

thousand

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in 1970.

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, even in 2000 the

Yamhill

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and the Columbia

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the same pattern with small

differnt

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differences

whereas

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the former reached 75

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and the latter 60

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Vocabulary: Replace the words yamhill, thousand with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

173 words

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Demographics
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Growth rate
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Service provision
Housing market
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