The line graph shows the Population in the state of Oregon by county. Three counties that incresed in population between 1940 and 2000, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington had shown the different increasing.
The line chart gives data about the population in the state of Oregon by country y. Three countries ies that
rised
in population from 1940 to 2000. all the data are measured in thousands
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rose
Overall
, it is clear from the chart that the
Washington has Correct article usage
apply
different
pattern and over the period Add an article
a different
its
dramatically increased. On the opposite, the Correct pronoun usage
it
Yamhill
and the Columbia have the same pattern over the period with a slight change.
it can be observed that tht
Washington is the Correct your spelling
that
most
country with Correct quantifier usage
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high
population growth at 75 Correct word choice
the highest
thousands
in 1994, nearly to 135 Change to singular
thousand
thousand
in 1970 and mostly with 240 thousand
in 2000.
According to
what is shown, the Yamhill
and the Columbia reached the same point with 30 thounsand
in 1940. Correct your spelling
thousand
in addition
, the Yamhill
achieved a slight increase with 45 thousand
in 1970 while
the Coulmbia achieved 30 thousand
in 1970. Moreover
, even in 2000 the Yamhill
and the Columbia keep
the same pattern with small Wrong verb form
kept
differnt
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differences
whereas
the former reached 75 thousand
and the latter 60 thousand
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