The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied thay were with their visit, during the same two periods.

The first table provides information about the total number of visitors to Ashdown Museum from the unrefurbished

year

to

completely

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refurbished

year

.The second bar chart displays the percentage of visitor satisfaction during the same two periods.

It is clear that

after

refurbishment

,Ashdown Museum saw an increase in the number of visitors,from 74,000 to 92,000.

Moverover

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Moreover

,it can be seen that the level of visitor satisfaction

also

rose. Looking at the information in more detail,the

year

before

refurbishment

,the major visitor felt dissatisfied,at 40%.Followed by,the proportion of very dissatisfied accounted for 30%.As for the percentages of very satisfied and satisfied at 15% and 10%,respectively. In terms of the

year

after

refurbishment

,it

is notice

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that the result has a significant change.The visitors who feel very satisfied constituted 40%,which is the highest percentage out

others

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categories.

Additionally

,the proportion of very satisfied at 35%.

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to the

year

before

refurbishment

,the proportion of dissatisfied and very satisfied both witnessed a

declined

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,with the former at 5% and the latter at 15%.