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The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.

The following table shows the number of people from five European nations living in each other’s countries in 2011.
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tabel
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table
 chart illustrates
that
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the whole
number
 of
the
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citizens from five European
countries
 resident in other
countries
 in 2011.
Overall
,
Germany
 is the most country that
have
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people
live
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 in it from other
countries
.
Also
, the
number
 of Italian
people
 resident in
Germany
 is the highest. Following
germany
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Germany
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,
Britin
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Britain
 is the second country with
high
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number of
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population. The three
countries
 with the highest
number
 of populations are
Germany
,
Britin
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Britain
, and Spain. Unlike
Germany
, polish
people
 dominate the
number
 of citizens in
Britin
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Britain
 with more than 500
thousand
polish
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people
 and almost 300
thousand
of
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german
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Germans
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.
Furthermore
, Spain is the third leading country with just under 400
thousand
of
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british
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British
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 population and around 200
thousand
german
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Germans
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. The two
least
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countries
 with
less
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the lowest
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 populations are Italy and
poland
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Poland
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. Polish
people
 are the leading citizens in Italy with just over 100
thousnd
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thousand
thousands
 of polish
people
.
On the contrary
, Poland has the lowest
number
 of
people
 from other
countries
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, countries, germany, people, thousand with synonyms.
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