Use the information and language from this lesson to answer this Writing Part 1 task. The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, Do not give your opinion, just the facts. and make comparisons where relevant.

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Nowadays, society prefers a fast and more convenient lifestyle, mostly affected by their work requirements. The bar chart proves that working or other external factors can have a big impact on how people prefer their living methods. It clearly shows the significant shifts in homeownership and renting trends among people aged 25-34 in the UK between 2004 and 2014. Notably, the
percentage
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of homeowners decreased
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the
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of renters increased. Over a 10-year period, homeownership rates among communities aged 25-34 declined significantly during the proportion of renters, ultimately surpassing homeowners by the end of it all. The
percentage
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of homeowners was approximately 58% in 2004, which is 30% higher than the renter rate. Over time,
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percentage
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slightly declined to approximately 56% in 2006 but
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steadily decreased until eventually reaching about 52% by 2011.
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, in 2012, it steadily dropped
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to almost 52% before steadily declining over time and
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reaching around 36% by 2014.
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the owners, in 2004, approximately 20% of people were renting, the figure kept rising to approximately 33% by 2005 and remaining stable until 2006. Over the subsequent five years,
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,
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rate experienced considerable steady growth, eventually reaching around 41% by 2011. It stabilized for another year before skyrocketing even
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to 47% by 2014, dramatically surpassing homeownership rates altogether.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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