Use the information and language from this lesson to answer this Writing Part 1 task. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, Do not give your opinion, just the facts. and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Use the information and language from this lesson to answer this Writing Part 1 task.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below gives information about how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features,

Do not give your

opinion, just the facts.

and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
Nowadays, society prefers a fast and more convenient lifestyle, mostly affected by their work requirements. The bar chart proves that working or other external factors can have a big impact on how people prefer their living methods. It clearly shows the significant shifts in homeownership and renting trends among people aged 25-34 in the UK between 2004 and 2014. Notably, the
percentage
of homeowners decreased
while
the
percentage
of renters increased. Over a 10-year period, homeownership rates among communities aged 25-34 declined significantly during the proportion of renters, ultimately surpassing homeowners by the end of it all. The
percentage
of homeowners was approximately 58% in 2004, which is 30% higher than the renter rate. Over time,
this
percentage
slightly declined to approximately 56% in 2006 but
then
steadily decreased until eventually reaching about 52% by 2011.
Moreover
, in 2012, it steadily dropped
further
to almost 52% before steadily declining over time and
finally
reaching around 36% by 2014.
Besides
the owners, in 2004, approximately 20% of people were renting, the figure kept rising to approximately 33% by 2005 and remaining stable until 2006. Over the subsequent five years,
however
,
this
rate experienced considerable steady growth, eventually reaching around 41% by 2011. It stabilized for another year before skyrocketing even
further
to 47% by 2014, dramatically surpassing homeownership rates altogether.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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