The given charts illustrate the participation of athletes in the Summer and Winter Olympics from 1988 to 2004.
The given charts illustrate the participation of athletes in the Summer and Winter Olympics from 1988 to 2004.
In general,
it is clear that
the number of Summer sports players at the end
of the period was the greatest while
that of Winter sports experienced a dramatic decline despite an
initial growth.
Correct article usage
apply
According to
the graph, there were 6 million
athletes engaging in the 1998 Winter Olympics, this
figure rose moderately to 8 million
in 1992 before nosediving by 5 million
in 2000. Then
, it witnessed a gradual fall to only 2 million
in 2004.
As regards the pie chart, the 2004 Olympics recorded the highest number of participants, at 9 million
. Whereas
the year 2000 and 1988 respectively had the second-highest attendance (7 million
) and the third (5 million
). There were significantly fewer competitors in 1996 and 1992, with the former figure being 3 million
compared to only 2 million
of the latter.Submitted by weezel on
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