You learned the news from your friend regarding a part-time job at a new international company near your house. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should: explain why you need that job give details of what you can do for the company suggest the time that you can work.

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would like to apply for same.
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am a heavy truck driver
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my job. am a family man.
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have one baby and my wife.
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future.
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have good
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.every time honest for company. Am
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am to 9:00 pm Your faithfuly Tilak Raj
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Make sure you capitalize the pronoun 'I'. For example, write 'I am writing this letter,' and 'I have a baby.'
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You should elaborate more on your skills and experience to show how you can contribute to the company. For example, specify any relevant certifications and detail your past job achievements.
coherence cohesion
Your letter should have distinct paragraphs for each main idea. For instance, discuss why you need the job in one paragraph, your qualifications and experience in another, and your availability in a separate paragraph.
coherence cohesion
Ensure you have a proper salutation and closing. Standard closings include phrases like 'Yours faithfully' or 'Yours sincerely', followed by a comma and your name. Also, avoid repetition of phrases such as 'every time honest for company.'
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You clearly stated your availability, which is important for the employer to know.
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You provided a clear reason for needing the job, which helps the reader understand your motivation.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • part-time employment
  • reliable
  • flexible schedule
  • proficient in
  • customer service
  • time management
  • initiative
  • enthusiastic
  • interpersonal skills
  • availability
  • roles and responsibilities
  • professional environment
  • upcoming commitments
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