The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
This
picture illustrates process
of making Add an article
the process
a process
tea
products and making cup
of Add an article
a cup
tea
. In general, there are 18 stages of producing tea
from sow
Replace the word
sowing
tea
seeds to drinking and enjoying.
First of all
Add a comma
all,
tea
grows in India and China. Farmers from this
country sow tea
seeds and this
plants grow Change the determiner
these
on
Change preposition
in
sunshine’s
. After that workers pick Change the noun form
sunshines
sunshine
this
Correct determiner usage
these
tea
leaves and put them into their baskets then
this
Change the determiner
these
tea
leaves are dried by sun
. In the next Add an article
the sun
stage
Add a comma
stage,
tea
leaves are packed into boxes and loaded onto a truck. And then
this
boxes are delivered to supermarkets and customers can buy them and take Change the determiner
these
away
home. Next time the kettle is filled up with water and Correct pronoun usage
them away
boil
. Wrong verb form
boiled
After
this
stage tea
bag is put into the cup and pour
hot water, Wrong verb form
poured
then
consumers should wait for 2 minutes. Milk and sugar are put into this
cup with spoon
and Correct article usage
a spoon
finally
they can drink it and Add a comma
finally,
enjoy
.Correct pronoun usage
enjoy it
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structure
Consider adding a brief conclusion to round off your essay. It can help improve the structure and give a sense of closure.
cohesion
Try to use transition words and phrases more consistently to enhance the flow between sentences and paragraphs.
support
Include more relevant details when describing steps to provide a clearer and more comprehensive response. For example, specify what kind of tea leaves are being picked.
clear ideas
You have outlined the main stages in the process of making tea and preparing a cup of tea clearly, which shows a good understanding of the information.
logical structure
You have logically organized the information, making it easy to follow along with each step.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite