The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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A glance at the charts provided
highlight
how the rates Correct subject-verb agreement
highlights
between
owning three different electrical devices Change preposition
of
affect
the weekly hours that families spent on doing household work in one country from 1920 to 2019.
Wrong verb form
affected
Overall
, the most significant change observed is the percentage of all three electrical devices met a considerable rising trend, Linking Words
while
the time Linking Words
of spending
on household work decreased reversely.One of the most significant Wrong verb form
spent
change
is the fraction of vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
changes
cleaner
, it was the lowest Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
initially
, but it Linking Words
have
Change the verb form
has
raised
up at the top of the rank, sharing first place with the number of Verb problem
risen
refrigerator
.
To probe more deeply, the rate of owning vacuum Change to a plural noun
refrigerators
cleaner
skyrocketed Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
nearly
90%, from less than 5% to around 100% from 1920 to 1970, remained at 100%, followed by the rate of Change preposition
by nearly
refrigerator
during the period 1980 to 2019.
Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
In contrast
, in the beginning, the percentage of washing machines was the highest at 40%, but it was kept Linking Words
crossovered
by the percentage of vacuum Correct your spelling
crossover
crossovers
cleaner
and Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
refrigerator
, Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
in
after 1940 and in 1960 respectively.What Change preposition
apply
have
to Correct subject-verb agreement
has
particularly
mentioned, Add a missing verb
be particularly
the
Add a missing verb
is the
decline
trend of the weekly hours that families spent on doing household work dropped nearly 15% every 20 years, from 50% to 20% between 1920 and 1960, and Change the verb form
declining
then
it Linking Words
have
met a stable trend, dropping from 20% to 10% from 1960 to 2019.Change the verb form
has
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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