The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate how much proportion of energy was produced in a country between 1983 and 2003.
The proportion of oil
production
experienced a slight drop in the 20-year period, from 42% to 38%. However
, it still took the leading position among these five. Similarly
, the data of
coal decreased significantly by 10%, reaching 13%, taking the fourth in 2003. The percentage of Hydropower Change preposition
on
production
stabilized at 4%, which was the last
since 1983.
By contrast
, the figures for natural gas
and Nuclear power showed upward trends to 21% and 24%, respectively. The rise of Natural gas
production
was similar to the decline in coal, helping Natural gas
overtook
coal as the third.
Wrong verb form
overtake
Overall
, it is clear from the chart that the percentage of oil and coal production
showed downward trends. Whereas
natural gas
and nuclear power went up, and Hydropower remained stable.Submitted by yihualuo525 on
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