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The bar graph below give information computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the year 2002 and 2010.

The bar graph below give information computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by the level of education for the year 2002 and 2010.
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The bar diagram compares the proportions of
owners
 of computers in relation to the population from 2002 to 2010 and
educational
Correct article usage
the educational
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 level for the years 2002 and 2010.
Overall
 it is immediately apparent that
computer
owners
 increased with advancing age and
also
 with higher educational level. 2010 recorded the highest number of people who owned
computer
 devices at nearly 80%.
By contrast
, only just below 60% of
persons
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people
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 were
computer
owners
. Meanwhile, approximately 65% of
computer
owners
 had
this
 device in 2006 whilst just below and above
this
 figure had the machine in 2004 and 2008 respectively. Turning to persons with formal education, the majority of
computer
owners
 had achieved the highest level of education (Postgraduate qualifiers) at 75% in 2002 with
20
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a 20
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% increase in 2010.
However
, no high school diploma
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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ranked the
least
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lowest
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 number of people who owned computers at about 15% in 2002 and close to half the
owners
 with
the
Correct article usage
a
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 Postgraduate qualification in 2010. Whilst about 85% of people who had these machines had
College
Correct article usage
a College
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 education, around 20% less and more of
this
 number were High School graduates and
Bachelor
Change noun form
Bachelor's
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 degree holders respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words owners, computer with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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