Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

The world nowadays inching towards
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environment and the very first initiative
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healthy is recycling
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waste
.some individuals believe that
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not managed properly. so, Governments should
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a legal decision.I believe
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and regulations would help to
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the
waste
. The disposal can be pulled off in an efficient manner by
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focusing on the 3Rs. That includes reduce, reuse and recycle.
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3Rs should be strictly followed
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there should be legal rules and regulations from the government side.
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and recycled in every school community,
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students are educated about
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parents, community members,
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which helps to reduce
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not only now but
also
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violate
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, every company should follow the basic
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guidelines
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may
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.There should be
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in every shopping
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reusable bags.
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the
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there
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house
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and they should separate the garbage too. In conclusion,
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can play a vital role
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garbage about
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the environment sustainable with proper policies.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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