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The graph below shows prediction about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030

The graph below shows prediction about the number of people who will study three major world languages between 2020 and 2030
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The graph gives information about
changing
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the changing
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number
 of studios in the world for three different languages over a decade from 2020 to 2030.
Overall
,
it is clear that
English
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the English
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subject
 will gain more
but
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apply
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pupils in the next decade,
while
 the other two
language
subject
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subjects
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 will be less significant. Looking at the details, the
number
 of people who
studied
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study
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English
 will increase from 550
million
 to 700
million
 between 2020 and 2030.
However
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 during increasing
English
language
subject
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subjects
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 will see a fluctuation once. After that,
English
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the English
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language
subject
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subjects
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 will grow rapidly without any falling. If you look at two other
language
 subjects, we can see those subjects will rise significantly over a ten-year between 2020 and 2030. In 2024, the
number
 of people who studied
Spanish
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the Spanish
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language
were
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was
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 two times higher than that of Mandarin
students
, their
number
 of studios
were
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was
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 equal in 2024. Until 2026 their
number
 of
students
 will improve gradually, and their total of
students
 will still be equal.
However
, the Mandarin
students
 will start jumping remarkably from 2026 to 2030.
Finally
, the
number
 of marketing
students
 reach just below 600
million
, and the
Spanish
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number of Spanish
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 pupils will reach
at
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500
million
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, english, subject, language, million, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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