Is some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

While

it is widely claimed that

children

in some cultures were

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taught

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to work hard in

order

to achieve anything, others argue that

this

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in definitive results is hardworking. Both points of view and reasons why I agree with the latter statement will be elaborated on in

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essay.

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with, it may

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sensible for some to believe that

children

should be taught to put their own effort

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something they dreamed

for

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part of promoting

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.

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is possibly because working hard

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part of determination which

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an important role in

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achieving

something. Take foreign language exams,

for example

; students need to study and revise the content daily in

order

to pass the exams. Without enough practice and

such

efforts, it is impossible for non-native speakers to understand the languages. Many opponents of

this

idea might

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that working hard does not always

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guaranteed

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success.

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effort of

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with the result.

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, students might study daily and put

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some tests

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even if

they put all their effort

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it.

However

, I personally argue in favour of the possible negative effect of that message seeing that kids can ignore the possibility of unwanted

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which

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in

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to cope with failure. In

this

respect, preparing them with an attitude of anything is possible to become

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and so

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failure in

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world should be cultivated

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. In summary,

although

it is undeniable that we have to work hard in

order

to gain something

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useful message to

children

, I am of the opinion that it rather

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a single-sided attitude and

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to be fixed in

order

to prepare them for

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reality once they become

adult

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.