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The chart below shows what Anthropologie graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years

The chart below shows what Anthropologie graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years
#anthropologie #graduates #university #course #salaries #anthropologist #work #five #years
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pie chart and table represent the information
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 an
undergraduated
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undergraduate
 Anthropologists'
carreer
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career
paths
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 from an unspecified university and show the amount of earnings
recieved
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received
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five-years
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five-year
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experience
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Anthropologists
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Anthropologist
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 working in three different employment, indicated in percentages and US dollars respectively.
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that
majority
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 of
an Anthropology graduates
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Anthropology graduates
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 worked
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 a
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 job,
whereas
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as
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 a part-time job and
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 postgraduate study was the least.
However
, it is interesting to note that
an anthropologists
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anthropologists
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worked
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 in
a
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 government sector received higher
salariese
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salaries
 than those in private companies.
To begin
 with,
at
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52% of the
gradute
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graduate
 students working full-time was the greatest
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 among other
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 choices, followed by part-time
employee
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employees
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, and unemployed, at 15% and 12%, respectively. Surprisingly, the ratio of students who
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pursue
further
 study
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 being
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full-time staff and unknown groups have the same figure at 8%, which is 3% higher than those who work
as
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 a part-time job and study group. In regards
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, it
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 can be clearly seen that the majority of both government
staffs
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 and freelance consultants gain more than $75,000 up to about 80%,
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 only 5% of the staff in both
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that
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recieved
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received
 less than $50,000.
On the other hand
, slightly above
one third
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 of the employees that worked in private companies
recieved
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received
 of $50,000-$74,900 which was the greatest proportion.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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