The chart below shows what Anthropologie graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years
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career
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five-years
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five-year
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Anthropologists
working in three different employment, indicated in percentages and US dollars respectively.
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Anthropologist
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
an Anthropology graduates
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postgraduate study was the least. Wrong verb form
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worked
in Correct pronoun usage
who worked
a
government sector received higher Correct article usage
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than those in private companies.
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salaries
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52% of the Change preposition
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students working full-time was the greatest Correct your spelling
graduate
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proportion
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, and unemployed, at 15% and 12%, respectively. Surprisingly, the ratio of students who Fix the agreement mistake
employees
persue
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pursue
further
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full-time staff and unknown groups have the same figure at 8%, which is 3% higher than those who work Correct article usage
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as
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can be clearly seen that the majority of both government Correct pronoun usage
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staffs
and freelance consultants gain more than $75,000 up to about 80%, Fix the agreement mistake
staff
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only 5% of the staff in both group
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groups
that
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apply
recieved
less than $50,000. Correct your spelling
received
On the other hand
, slightly above one third
of the employees that worked in private companies Add a hyphen
one-third
recieved
of $50,000-$74,900 which was the greatest proportion.Correct your spelling
received
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