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Some people believe that reading is always a good habit. Others feel it depends on which books a person is reading. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Reading a book is very helpful and important habit. A lot of
people
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 think that reading many kind of different
books
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 are more effective,
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 others think that it depends on what kind of book they are reading. Nowadays
people
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 prefer to read different types of
books
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 like: scientific journals, historical
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, social magazines and medical newspapers in their life. Of course
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 may help them to improve their thinking horizon and
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 upgrade their knowledge.
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, the research shows that in United States of America scientists checked
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 thinking level between individuals who read different and certain
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 of
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, and
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 found that level of knowledge who read dissimilar
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 was higher in 25 per cent.
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, reading unalike
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 may can help humans to become more clever. Reading certain
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 of
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 have many benefits and helpful sides.
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people
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 who prefer to read a particular
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 of
books
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 may become leaders in their direction and have more confidence in their
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.
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, if medical workers start reading and getting more informations from only medical
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, it will be more effective way to become a head on their
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.
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 who
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 in medical sphere must know more information and must have more eruditions about
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 sphere, because they
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 with illness humans and
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 help them with their health. In conclusion i want to say my personal opinion. I think that
people
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 should read many different
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 of
books
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 because it can help them to improve many skills
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 as: mention, horizon and understanding.

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Try to make your ideas clearer and more comprehensive by expanding on them further and adding relevant details. For example, in your introduction, make sure to clearly present what your main arguments will be.
coherence cohesion
Make sure your essay has a logical flow and that your paragraphs are well-organized with clear topic sentences.
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Support your main points with more relevant specific examples. Examples can make your arguments more persuasive.
coherence cohesion
You have an introduction and a conclusion, which helps to give structure to your essay.
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You presented both sides of the argument, which shows a balanced approach.
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Your essay shows a good attempt at discussing various types of books and their impacts, which is relevant to the task given.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mental stimulation
  • knowledge acquisition
  • vocabulary expansion
  • stress reduction
  • memory improvement
  • analytical thinking
  • empathy
  • emotional intelligence
  • social cues
  • constructive content
  • morally uplifting
  • misinformation
  • harmful ideologies
  • critical reading skills
  • credible sources
  • inherently good habit
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