Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
The map above depicts the development of
a
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the
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countryside. For more detail, Chorleywood is a countryside near London whose population has
stabally
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stably
stability
increased
from
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since
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the middle of the nineteenth century. The development of the countryside was from 1868 until 1994.
In addition
, there are two components on the map. The first
one
is different colors to differentiate the way and the other
one
is information about the years. The black
colors
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color
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is to indicate a main road.
Besides
that, a white
one
is shows
motorway
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the motorway
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which built in 1970.
Last
, a railway that was constructed in 1909 is
symbolyzed
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symbolized
with black and white.
Furthermore
, from 1868 and 1883, the village only had
one
main road.
Then
, between 1883
until
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and
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1922, the village was added by another main road and
one
motorway.
Also
, in 1922 and 1970, Chorleywood developed places
were
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that were
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unknown because there
is
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was
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no
further
explanation about
it
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them
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on the map.
Lastly
, from 1970 and 1994, a railway was built.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words one with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • population
  • increased steadily
  • middle of the nineteenth century
  • development
  • location
  • factors
  • contributing
  • physical
  • infrastructural
  • effects
  • conclusion
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