The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features.
The line chart illustrates the proportion of individual's carbon dioxide
producing
between 1967 to 2007 in 3 Europe countries.
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produced
Overall
, Correct article usage
the Uk
Uk
shows the Correct your spelling
UK
largerest
amount of Correct your spelling
largest
co2
emissions Correct your spelling
CO2
compare
to the other three countries in 2007.Portugal and Italy Wrong verb form
compared
shows
the largest Change the verb form
show
increasment
all over the years Correct your spelling
increase
increasing
since
1967 to 2007, Change preposition
from
however
, Correct article usage
the Uk
Uk
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UK
witness
a decline. Sweden shows the Wrong verb form
witnessed
largerst
fluctuation, Correct your spelling
largest
which
the remaining Change preposition
in which
contries
were Correct your spelling
countries
relativly
stable up to 1987.
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relatively
Through over
the years UK Change preposition
Over
had shows
the Wrong verb form
showed
largerst
amount Correct your spelling
largest
on
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of
co2
in 1967 with just over 10%, Correct your spelling
CO2
this
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and this
steadly
went below 10% Correct your spelling
steadily
since
1987 to 2007. Sweden Change preposition
from
has
the wildest Wrong verb form
had
fluctaution
with just Correct your spelling
fluctuation
fluctuations
aroung
8% in 1967, Correct your spelling
around
massive
jump to over 10% in 1977, before falling under the 8% in 1987.
Portugal and Italy started below 6%, remaining relatively steady until 1977. Correct article usage
a massive
The
Portugal kept to Correct article usage
apply
shows
a huge Wrong verb form
show
inreasment
after Correct your spelling
investment
bieng
the lower co2 Correct your spelling
being
producers
with just Fix the agreement mistake
producer
uder
2% till 1977, Correct your spelling
under
then
started to grow more in the further
years to reach above 4% in 2007. However
, it remainds
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remained
to
emissions the Change preposition
for
smalles persantage
of Correct your spelling
small percentage
co2
till 2007, it was Correct your spelling
CO2
in
the same point Change preposition
at
with
Sweden. Italy kept relatively stable just shows a little Change preposition
as
persentage
of Correct your spelling
percentage
increasment
to reach above 6% in 2007.Correct your spelling
increased
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words co with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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