The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selcting and reporting the main features.

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The line chart illustrates the proportion of individual's carbon dioxide

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between 1967 to 2007 in 3 Europe countries.

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the Uk

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to the other three countries in 2007.Portugal and Italy

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1967 to 2007,

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a decline. Sweden shows the

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countries

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in 1967 with just over 10%,

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1987 to 2007. Sweden

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8% in 1967,

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jump to over 10% in 1977, before falling under the 8% in 1987. Portugal and Italy started below 6%, remaining relatively steady until 1977.

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Portugal kept to

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2% till 1977,

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started to grow more in the

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years to reach above 4% in 2007.

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small percentage

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till 2007, it was

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Sweden. Italy kept relatively stable just shows a little

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percentage

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increased

to reach above 6% in 2007.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words co with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 6 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

205 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

carbon dioxide emissions
average per capita
trend
increase/decrease
compare/contrast
period/stable
turning point
fluctuations
environmental policies
economic factors
technological advancements
sustainable practices
emission reduction targets
climate change
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