Modern appliances in the home have become more common, leaving no doubt that advances in technology have improved our lifestyle. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that technological improvements have made easier our lifestyle, introducing to our daily basis Modern appliances at
home
. I absolutely agree with this
statement when some companies have developed alternatives for intelligent homes. This
essay will discuss in more detail how technology could contribute to the best in our lives
.
It is important to enhance the fact that over time life
is becoming stressful and overwhelming because introducing advances in technology makes us feel that our life
is going faster. For that reason, some companies have been developing different kinds of software using Artificial intelligence (AI) to help improve our lives
. For example
, the iPhone brings Siri as an assistant, Amazon - Alexa to help at home
, and Google is a combination of between iPhone and Amazon with extra features that integrate the control of home
appliances. All of those are able to help people
to increase their productivity at their workplace, allow parents to set schedules and help their offspring to study at home
. Moreover
, reduces the cost of living in terms of the use of their appliances by setting the time to turn the lights on and off, also
you are able to check remotely if the lights at home
were left on by mistake. For these reasons and more that have not been mentioned, people
are motivated to acquire these kinds of devices
.
However
, it is well known that these devices
have a backup of every single life
detail, they record and store them on the cloud. Basically, we are sharing all data, conversations, and numerous things since the first moment that we welcome into our lives
the technological friends mentioned above. The best and simplest example is the fact when you research Google Colours, you will be able to find it on social media or anywhere on your computer, tablet, or smartphone articles related to colours. So if the information that is
being collected from your different devices
is used with
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is where
the negative impact will cause damage to Verb problem
,
people
's lives
. The reason why some groups of people
are sceptical or reluctant to use them.
In conclusion, I consider that technological advances definitely have made our life
easier, for
this
reason, I would recommend to those people
that
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devices
could do for them to have an opportunity and let them improve their life
. If still feel concerned in terms of privacy just use them little by little and modify their configuration to the level that as a user you feel comfortable.Submitted by mantonieta.albarracin on
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coherence cohesion
Work on improving sentence structure and grammar to enhance readability and coherence.
task achievement
Provide more balanced arguments by discussing both positive and negative impacts of technological advances with equal weight.
task achievement
Good use of examples like Siri, Alexa, and Google to illustrate points.
coherence cohesion
Clear introduction and conclusion that frame the essay well.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.