You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is celebrating her Birthday soon and has invited you to a party. But you are unable to come because you are going to attend an important meeting that day. Write a letter to your friend and • thank her for the invitation; explain why you cannot come; • propose to meet on other day; Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mary,

Dear Mary I am writing a letter regarding a special thank you has
inviting
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your party Birthday.
Firstly
,
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want give say “ Happy Birthday to you “.
However
,
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would like to mention that
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cannot come to your Birthday. Because I have
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with family and
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want to say “ Sorry to you “ On the one hand,
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found
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especially event has many artists, rappers, models and celebrities.
Moreover
, it seems to me that, there are many things interesting and humorous. I hope that you will save memories and enjoy the moment with people.
On the other hand
, I would like to request that, see you soon when
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come back home. I want to invite you going a restaurant to eat beefsteak and have whisky.
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that,
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am looking forward to offering a gift you love to
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buy to give you. Best regards. Phung
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task achievement
Try to improve sentence structure and grammar for better clarity.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that paragraphs have a single clear idea to improve coherence.
task achievement
The letter covers all points required by the task: thanking for the invitation, explaining the inability to attend, and proposing an alternative meeting date.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is friendly and suitable for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The letter begins and ends appropriately with greetings and closings.

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