The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of times and doing housework in house holes in one country between 1920 and 2019
The two line graphs represent the information
of
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households in a particular country: one compares the percentage of households with Correct the article-noun agreement
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an
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applicances
, another shows Correct your spelling
applications
average
of Add an article
an average
the average
hours
of housework per weeks
per household between 1920 and 2019.
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week
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that trends of three electrical appliances experienced n upward trend, whereas
that of
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hours
of a
housework per week underwent a downward trend Correct article usage
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among
the given time frame. Change preposition
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was
the only appliances that remarkably Change the verb form
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household
first
half of the Add an article
the first
centuries
.
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century
To begin
with, in 1920, at 40% Washing
machine was Correct article usage
the Washing
owned
the highest among Verb problem
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other
two appliances, followed by Correct article usage
the other
vacuum
cleaner and refrigerator, at 30% and 2%,respectively. In 1920-1960, both washing Correct article usage
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machines
cleaner
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cleaners
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fridges skyrocketed up to 90% in 1960. Change preposition
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1980 -2019, washing Change preposition
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machines
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fluctated
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fluctuated
trends
and ended at 75% in 2019, Fix the agreement mistake
trend
whereas
the other twos
gradually reached Fix the agreement mistake
two
its
peak Correct pronoun usage
their
to
100% in 2019.
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numbers
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number
hours
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housework per week per household, in 1920, Correct article usage
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at
about 50 Change preposition
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hours
per week was the longest time spending
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decreased
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