The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph provides details about the
number
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of new
stores
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being opened and closed in one country from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
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, the rate of new
shops
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being opened was the highest during the first year before it was surpassed by the closure of
stores
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towards the end of the period. Despite
this
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, both the opening and closing of
shops
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showed fluctuations throughout the years. The highest
number
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of
shops
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being opened was in 2011.
This
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number
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stood at around 8,500 before it declined dramatically to around 4000
shops
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in 2012.
However
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, the opposite was true for the closure of new
shops
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. From 2011 to 2013, the rate of new
stores
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being closed increased from 6500 to more than 7000. The rates of new
shops
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being opened and closed in 2014 were relatively similar (around 6000). From 2014 to 2015, there was a considerable drop in the
number
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of
shops
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being closed. The
number
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of
shops
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reduced from 6500 to less than 500
shops
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.
While
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, in the same period, there was a gradual decrease in the
number
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of
stores
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being opened from about 6000 to 4000 and
this
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number
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was stable for the next two years before it declined to about 3000 in 2018.
In addition
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, 1000 more
shops
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were closing than opening from 2016 to 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, stores, shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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