Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Children

are born with

curiousity

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curiosity

and a little sense of the world around them. They need loads and loads of attention, yet not all

parents

can give the attention required. Some

parents

have considered keeping

pets

so the child can grow

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a companion. Contrary to

this

, some

parents

have regarded

pets

as a physical and health threat to their

children

. Even so, I personally view

pets

as loving creatures that would be wonderful companions

of

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children

. On one side,

children

are curious

of

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the outside world yet not all

parents

have the

time

to guard and keep them

safely

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. Most

parents

require

time

to do chores or work,

therefore

some

parents

would consider

pets

to

company

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their

children

and keep them entertained and safe. Another positive aspect of having

pets

is the natural instinct that

pets

have. These

pets

have the ability to sense threats around the

children

and bring them back into safety. Even so, some people would still consider

pets

a hassle and a threat to their

children

. From

this

perspective, most would argue that

pets

still require training and taming to be completely friendly to others, yet some

parents

do not have the

time

for

this

sort of training.

Hence

, when these

pets

are allowed near the

children

they may attack or play roughly against them. Another factor includes the

unhygenic

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unhygienic

behaviour of

pets

as they travel outside and step on dirt and possibly other animal excretes, making them a health threat to the

children

. Based on the two

arguements

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arguments

that a person would have regarding

this

issue, I would consider

pets

more

helping

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as the benefits of

pets

would

overweigh

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the process of pet taming.

Although

it is true that

pets

require taming for proper hygiene and behaviour, it would be beneficial in the long run. They would be the best friend for our

children

for a long period of

time

and become

comfort

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for personal problems that

children

feel burdened to share. These

pets

would

also

teach

children

to be more responsible and more caring. In conclusion, there are more benefits in keeping

pets

for

children

rather than not having

pets

for the

children

.