The line graph illustrates the number of magazine sales by a publisher in 4 European countries between 1999 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

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The line chart

Illustrations

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the proportion of

the

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apply

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magazine

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magazines

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purchased by authors between 1999 and 2002 in four

counties

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countries

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in Europe.

Overall

, Belgium and

France

witness

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the same

increaing

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increase

in 2002. Germany appeared the largest

persantage

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percentage

in 1999 after steadily

decreaing

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decreasing

as Halland. Belgium shows the largest fluctuations from the lowest in 1999 before steadily increasing in

further

years. Both Belgium and

France

were at the same percentage in 2002,

France

was steadily increasing from above 4% in 1999 to 5% in 2002 to represent one of the largest

percentage

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Beigium

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Belgium

witnessed

dramatic

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a dramatic

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increasing

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from being the lowest

just

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at just

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under 2% in 1999,

then

started to steadily

incresing

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increasing

to 5% in 2002,

same

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the same

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persentage

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percentage

France

. Germany dramatically went down after

hading

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having

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the

hightest

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highest

just above 4% in 1999, to steadily went under 3% in 2002. Holland had a little fluctuation starting with 3% in 1999,

increase

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increasing

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above 3%,

then

bieng

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being

steady in 2001 and 2002 with just 3%.

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The line graph illustrates the number of magazine sales by a publisher in 4 European countries between 1999 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

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