The line graph illustrates the number of magazine sales by a publisher in 4 European countries between 1999 and 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

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the proportion of

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apply

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magazine

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magazines

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purchased by authors between 1999 and 2002 in four

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in Europe.

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, Belgium and

France

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the same

increaing

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increase

in 2002. Germany appeared the largest

persantage

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percentage

in 1999 after steadily

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decreasing

as Halland. Belgium shows the largest fluctuations from the lowest in 1999 before steadily increasing in

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years. Both Belgium and

France

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were at the same percentage in 2002,

France

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was steadily increasing from above 4% in 1999 to 5% in 2002 to represent one of the largest

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Beigium

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Belgium

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dramatic

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increasing

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from being the lowest

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under 2% in 1999,

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started to steadily

incresing

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increasing

to 5% in 2002,

same

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persentage

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percentage

France

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. Germany dramatically went down after

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the

hightest

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highest

just above 4% in 1999, to steadily went under 3% in 2002. Holland had a little fluctuation starting with 3% in 1999,

increase

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above 3%,

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bieng

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being

steady in 2001 and 2002 with just 3%.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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