The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007.

The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007.
The bar chart compares the
number
of
elephants
in nine different Asian countries between 1997 and 2004.
Overall
, 1997 had more
elephants
in most nations, except in
China
and
Cambodia
, which saw an increase in the elephant population in 2004. Notably, the
number
of
elephants
in Laos remained the same for
both
years. Focusing on countries with more
elephants
in 1997, India topped the chart with just under 10,000
elephants
, which
then
dropped by approximately 2,500 seven years later. Vietnam had the least, with around 1,250
elephants
, dipping slightly by 2004. Myanmar, the second highest, had a little over 5,000
elephants
but dropped marginally to about 4,800, which was nearly double that of Sri Lanka and Malaysia,
both
registering roughly 2,700
elephants
in the beginning. Sri Lanka’s figure fell modestly by about 100,
whereas
Malaysia’s reduced significantly to less than half its initial
number
. Similar to Malaysia, Thailand, which was the third-ranked with nearly 4,000
elephants
, declined significantly by 2004 to around 2,000. As for other countries,
both
Cambodia
and
China
witnessed an increase in the
number
of
elephants
.
Cambodia
had around 2,000
elephants
, and
China
had 1,500 in 1997, with
Cambodia
increasing gently by 100 and
China
's
number
doubling.
However
, Laos had the same
number
of
elephants
for
both
years at around 2,000.
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