In order to be successful in sports, some people think you have to be physically strong. Others say that mental strength is more important. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Sports
plays a crucial role in people
lives Change noun form
people's
tremendousky
than ever before. Some say that Correct your spelling
tremendously
tremendous
being
a successful Unnecessary verb
apply
athletes
should be fit physically Correct the article-noun agreement
athlete
while
others believe that mental strength
is a vital point of being a successful person in sports
. This
essay discusses both viewponts
and I think these two aspects should Correct your spelling
viewpoints
need
to Wrong verb form
be needed
being
a Change the verb
be
victory
person in Replace the word
victorious
sports
.
On the one hand, sportsmen should be physically strong in order to they can give tough
fight to the Add an article
a tough
neeother
sportsmen, Correct your spelling
other
besides
can easily loss
their battle. Replace the word
lose
This
means, some sports
need a
physical fitness for runningCorrect article usage
apply
,
and jumping Remove the comma
apply
while
being overweight faces lot
Correct article usage
a lot
ofdifficulties
Correct your spelling
of difficulties
to do
all these activities. Change preposition
in doing
For example
, a
famous Correct article usage
the
sports
of cricket Fix the agreement mistake
sport
should need
Wrong verb form
needs
a
Correct article usage
apply
physicial
fitness and Correct your spelling
physical
strong
because Replace the word
strength
players
should run around the
huge size grounds. Needless to sayCorrect article usage
apply
that
, being physically strong brings more benefits to Correct word choice
apply
athlets
to succeed in Correct your spelling
athletes
sports
.
On the other hand
, mental strength
is of the utmost importance for players
on the grounds they face win
Correct subject-verb agreement
wins
an
Correct your spelling
and
loss
in their Fix the agreement mistake
losses
sports
carrer
, so they should need the mental Correct your spelling
career
strength
to calm their ind
from depression and stress. Correct your spelling
mind
This
is, mental
Correct word choice
because mental
strength
can help to
the Change preposition
apply
players
not being
Wrong verb form
be
aggressively
Change the word
aggressive
Change preposition
on inthe
inthe
ground and the opposite team Correct your spelling
the
players
. For instance
, fscing
Correct your spelling
facing
rumers
and allegations of Correct your spelling
rumours
sportmen's
rts Correct your spelling
sportsmen's
performance
, which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
sports
people should ignore all
Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
them
Correct pronoun usage
apply
otherwise
their actual performance
will be worst
and some Correct word choice
worse
players
might be replaced. Henceforth, sportmen
should need mental Correct your spelling
sportsmen
stablity
and Correct your spelling
stability
strength
to give better performance
in sports
.
In conclusion, although
, having a pysicial
fitness body can lead to Correct your spelling
physical
physician
play
Change the verb form
playing
easaily
without facing any difficulties in Correct your spelling
easily
sports
competitons
, mental Correct your spelling
competitions
strength
and stability can help to bring better performance
to sportsmen and ignores
the Correct subject-verb agreement
ignore
allegation
and rumors. Fix the agreement mistake
allegations
Therefore
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grammar
Pay attention to various grammatical errors, such as verb forms, prepositions, and articles. For example, correcting 'lot ofdifficulties' to 'a lot of difficulties' or 'a famous sports of cricket' to 'the famous sport of cricket.'
clarity
Make sure all sentences are clear and easy to follow. For example, 'Sports plays a crucial role in people lives tremendousky than ever before' could be rephrased as 'Sports play a more crucial role in people's lives than ever before.'
depth
Expand and elaborate on your points to make your arguments richer. For instance, you could provide more detailed examples or add a few sentences to further explain your points.
introduction
Your introduction clearly states the topic and presents both views effectively. This makes it easy for the reader to understand what will be discussed.
conclusion
You have included a conclusion that summarizes the key points discussed in the essay, ensuring that the essay has a clear ending.