Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packing are bad for the eenvironment. What danage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by the governments and individuals tp solve this problem?

There are adverse and negative impacts to the natural places
causing
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by some artificial containers and wrapping materials that
made
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from
plastics
.
This
essay is to examine what kind of impacts have been made on the naturals by these artificial materials, and
also
, any measures or activities the nations and citizens are able to perform to reduce
such
issues. Food supply chains and habitats of the wild animals, natural
ecosystem
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and landscapes are influenced severely by the used
plastics
.
Plastics
cannot be entirely or partially dissolved and digested by
the
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enzymes or
bacterium
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under normal ambitions.
The artificial
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materials
exist
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in the wild for a long time and can be easily found in many places
such
as oceans, forests and mountains.
Therefore
, some wild animals are misled and treat those
plastics
as food. For
instant
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,
jelly fish
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is
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usually mimicked by some plastic bags flooding
on
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the sea, which misleads sea
turtle
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to eat them.
In
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the
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result of
this
, the plastic bags cannot be digested by the turtle and will stuck into its stomach and eventually, it will die from lack of nutrition.
In addition
, the
used
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artificial containers occupy the landscapes reducing the number of optimal habitats for some other wild animals. In order to resolve
such
problems, legislation of laws by the government to minimise the discard of
rubbishes
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illegally is one of the effective approaches. Enhancing punishments is one of the useful ways to thread people not throwing the
litters
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away everywhere.
Moreover
, education is
also
crucial for teaching citizens the disadvantages caused by the
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plastics
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of plastics
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. Despite
from
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the measures of the nations, less consumption of artificial items by individuals is important for reducing
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of
plastics
. For
instant
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, they can bring their own reusable drinking bottles and lunch boxes to
picnic
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or hiking.
Furthermore
, declining the number of those items left in the natural places is another
is
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helpful for conservation of the wildlife. Some volunteers are willing to pick up and recollect the used ones from the beaches or on the route of hiking to the trach fields. In conclusion,
plastics
makes
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numerous
of
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bad outcomes
to
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the
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wild creatures and natural landscapes. Both
of
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nations and citizens are capable
to act
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something and
resolve
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these together.
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