The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the
quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
visitors
who traveled
to Change the spelling
travelled
Brighton
, the UK
, during this
7 years from 2009 and 2016.
Correct determiner usage
the
Overall
the total numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
the
tourists visiting Correct article usage
apply
Brighton
, the Uk
increased year by year Correct your spelling
UK
Besides
, the number
of the
Correct article usage
apply
visitors
that staying
on Wrong verb form
stayed
cruise
Add an article
a cruise
the cruise
ship
was fewer than the people who Fix the agreement mistake
ships
choose
to stay on Wrong verb form
chose
island
Correct article usage
the island
According to
diagram
, in 2009, the total Add an article
the diagram
a diagram
number
of visitor who traveled
to Change the spelling
travelled
Brighton
the Uk
was 2 million
approximately 1.5 million
people staying on the stand, however
the others staying at Add a comma
however,
cruise
ships. Over the period from 2010 to 2011,the number
of visitors
staying on cruise
ships dramatically dropped reached
its bottom Wrong verb form
reaching
just
under 0.5 Change preposition
of just
million
, but there was an upward trend in number
of those who Add an article
the number
staying
on Wrong verb form
stayed
island
In the 5 years spanning from 2011 through Add an article
the island
2016
the Add a comma
2016,
number
of the
Correct article usage
apply
visitors
traveled
to Wrong verb form
travelling
Brighton
the Uk
sharply went up to 7 Correct your spelling
UK
million
. Furthermore
, the number
of tourists staying on cruise
ships rapidly increases to 4million
Correct your spelling
4 million
surpass
those who staying on the island (Wrong verb form
surpassing
3million
)Correct your spelling
3 million
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