Nowadays, it is possible for both scientists and tourists to go to explore natural environments that are far away from the place where they live, such as the South Pole. This essay will discuss the benefits and the drawbacks of this development.

It is contended that

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curiosity brings

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impressive thought,

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and

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intention to discover natural environments,

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as the South

Pole

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and disadvantages of

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the tourists.

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the strategic concept about the planning journey and survival

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for those who

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exploring

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rare natural places like

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Pole

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journey took

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proven that

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technology

is not well-implemented with the actual South

Pole

's climate and conditions.

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lower temperature is the main reason

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high cost and expensive tools

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needed to

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and

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in

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place.

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things that have been explained above, the researchers and

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believe that exploring

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rare place has

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benefit

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people successfully

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and

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in

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place, they will discover new findings that important for

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, or

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practical advanced

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for human life. In conclusion, there are pros and cons

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this

idea

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exploring

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natural environments

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Pole

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to

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the newest and sophisticated infrastructure for adapting

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rare conditions to reach

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