The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarisee the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram shows how honey is produced by bees, which involves three major stages that include hive preparation,
nectar
collection, evaporation, and honey production.
In the first stage, the bees prepare the hive to ensure that they are ready to store nectar
. Then
, they fly away searching for a plant with nectar
to be sucked and bring it to the hive. Later, it is placed into the hexagonal cells for a certain time.
In the final stage, the bees flap their wings rapidly in order to create air which helps the process of evaporating so that it will produce water that will mix with the nectar
stored in each cell. After some time, it will harden as all the water content inside it evaporates leading to the production of it that is
ready to be harvested.
In conclusion, there are three complicated stages that are naturally done in producing honey.Submitted by kelly on
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