The diagram below presents how the instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram below presents how the instant noodles are manufactured.
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The diagram below displays the process
how
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instant
noodles
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are produced. As we can see,
instant
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the instant
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noodles making
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noodles-making
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process starts in storage silos where the base of
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food is made from flour.
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, it is mixed with oil and water. After that, it gets rolled
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dough
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sheets and gets cut into
dough
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strips. After all of
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,
dough
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strips get into
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noodles
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noodle
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discs. In
noodles
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discs
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they get cooked and dried.
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Noodles
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The noodles
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itself
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are ready but the process doesn't end here. It gets mixed with vegetables and spices.
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they put it into special cups and label it. That's how
instants
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instant
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noodles
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are made.
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, there are 8 stages, which are making
dough
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in storage silos, mixing, rolling, cutting
dough
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sheets, putting strips into discs, cooking and drying, combining with vegetables and spices,
labeling
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labelling
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and sealing, some equipments, which are a mixer, a cooker, a roller and 7 resources, which are flour, water, oil, vegetables, spices, cups and
labe
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label
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles, dough with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • mixing ingredients
  • dough preparation
  • sheeting
  • steaming
  • cutting techniques
  • dehydration
  • deep-frying
  • cooling system
  • packaging
  • quality control
  • production line
  • mass production
  • food preservation
  • convenience food
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