The diagram below presents how the instant noodles are manufactured.
The diagram below displays the process
how
instant Change preposition
of how
noodles
are produced.
As we can see, Use synonyms
instant
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the instant
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noodles making
process starts in storage silos where the base of Add a hyphen
noodles-making
this
food is made from flour. Linking Words
Then
, it is mixed with oil and water. After that, it gets rolled Linking Words
to
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into
dough
sheets and gets cut into Use synonyms
dough
strips.
After all of Use synonyms
this
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dough
strips get into Use synonyms
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noodles
discs. In Fix the agreement mistake
noodle
noodles
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discs
they get cooked and dried. Add a comma
discs,
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Noodles
Correct article usage
The noodles
itself
are ready but the process doesn't end here. It gets mixed with vegetables and spices. Correct pronoun usage
themselves
Then
they put it into special cups and label it. That's how Linking Words
instants
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instant
noodles
are made.
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Overall
, there are 8 stages, which are making Linking Words
dough
in storage silos, mixing, rolling, cutting Use synonyms
dough
sheets, putting strips into discs, cooking and drying, combining with vegetables and spices, Use synonyms
labeling
and sealing, some equipments, which are a mixer, a cooker, a roller and 7 resources, which are flour, water, oil, vegetables, spices, cups and Change the spelling
labelling
labe
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label
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