The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
This
picture illustrates the process of making tea
products and making a cup of tea
. In general, there are 18 stages of producing tea
from sowing tea
seeds to drinking and enjoying.
First of all, tea
grows in India and China. Farmers from this
country sow tea
seeds and these plants grow in sunshine. After that workers pick these tea
leaves and put them into their baskets then
these tea
leaves are dried by the sun. In the next stage, tea
leaves are packed into boxes and loaded onto a truck. And then
these boxes are delivered to supermarkets and customers can buy them and take them away home. Next time the kettle is filled up with water and boiled. After
this
stage tea
bag is put into the cup and poured hot water, then
consumers should wait for 2 minutes. Milk and sugar are put into this
cup with a spoon and finally
, they can drink it and enjoy it.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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task achievement
Ensure clarity in each stage of the process to avoid ambiguity for readers. For instance, breaking down each stage might enhance comprehension.
coherence cohesion
Try to use cohesive devices to link the stages more smoothly. For instance, using words like 'subsequently', 'meanwhile', or 'afterward' can help.
task achievement
The essay provides a thorough overview of both main processes — tea production and preparation.
coherence cohesion
The introduction gives a clear summary of the total process, setting a good context for the reader.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite