Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Governments in some countries spend large
amount
of Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
mony
on Correct your spelling
money
roads
. I completely agree with the idea that are
a waste of Change the verb form
is
money
, and that money
should be spend
on Change the verb form
be spent
railways
.
There are several of
reasons why Change preposition
apply
roads
should be abandoned. Firstly
, it is extermaly expinsive
to Correct your spelling
extremely expensive
bulid
and Correct your spelling
build
take
Change the verb form
takes
long
Change the article
a long
time
to finsh
the project. Correct your spelling
finish
Secondly
, it is to
risky to travel Replace the word
too
in
the Change preposition
on
roads
there
are Correct word choice
because there
alot
of Correct your spelling
a lot
people’s
Change noun form
people
ride
Wrong verb form
riding
to
fast and maybe lead to Replace the word
too
trafic
accidents. There is Correct your spelling
traffic
a
study Capitalize word
A
puplished
by New York Correct your spelling
published
Universty
in 2023 Correct your spelling
University
says
71% of Correct pronoun usage
that says
death
in the USA Fix the agreement mistake
deaths
becuse
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because
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of trafic
trafic accindnts
, Correct your spelling
traffic accidents
however
the Add the comma(s)
however,
numbers
is high and Fix the agreement mistake
number
dont
worth the risk. Verb problem
aren't
Finaly
, the Correct your spelling
Finally
time
take
for Wrong verb form
taken
your
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you
reach
your Fix the infinitive
to reach
diestny
is Correct your spelling
destiny
to
long Replace the word
too
cmpring
if you Correct your spelling
camping
comparing
spring
using
the Wrong verb form
use
trian
.
I Correct your spelling
train
trial
belive
that the Correct your spelling
believe
money
spent in
Change preposition
on
railways
is worth it. It is much cheaper to bulid
Correct your spelling
build
railways
and take lees
Correct your spelling
less
time
then
Correct your spelling
than
roads
. However
, it is more save
and rare you hear about Replace the word
safe
death
in train Add an article
the death
travels
. I think using the new Correct subject-verb agreement
travel
elctronic
trains is so fast and you will reach your destination in Correct your spelling
electronic
electric
time
. Furthermore
, travling
Correct your spelling
travelling
in
Change preposition
by
trains
is more Fix the agreement mistake
train
comfort
and you can Replace the word
comfortable
finsh
your work Correct your spelling
finish
while
you travling
Correct your spelling
travelling
for example
, finsh
your homework or send emails Correct your spelling
finish
for
your work that Change preposition
about
save
Correct subject-verb agreement
saves
for
you Change preposition
apply
alot
of Correct your spelling
a lot
time
.
In conclusion, my view is that governments should spend mony
on Correct your spelling
money
railways
that benefit all people, and is wrong to waste money
on roads
because it
not worth the risk and should try to avoid it.Add a verb
it is
it was
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grammar
Carefully proofread your essay to correct spelling errors and grammatical mistakes. For instance, words like 'mony' should be 'money,' 'expinsive' should be 'expensive,' etc.
task response
Provide more relevant specific examples to support your arguments. For instance, you could mention successful railway projects in particular countries or regions.
task response
Ensure your points are clearly explained and fully developed. Some ideas could use more detailed explanation and evidence.
structure
You have a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps the reader understand your main argument.
task response
Your essay presents a coherent argument in favor of investing in railways rather than roads.
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