Write at least 150 words. The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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line chart depicts
a
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the
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resettlements of people from
a
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the
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countryside to
a big cities
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big cities
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in three countries - Iran, Indonesia, and Russia. At first glance, we can see that
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apply
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in all of these country is
the
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a
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strong
tendence
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tendency
of moving
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to move
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of
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apply
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the population to
an
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apply
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urban areas. These three countries can be divided into two groups.
First,
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the group of significant
rising
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of
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in
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the city population
, contents
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consists of
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Iran and Russia.
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first place in
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group
belong
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belongs
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to Iran, which started in 2000 with the smallest quantity of people living in the cities - 8
millons
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million
, nowadays reached the number of 80
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millions
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million
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, and
would
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will
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growth
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grow
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up
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apply
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to 95
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millions
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million
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in 2025 (in accordance with the forecast).
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, Russia,
that
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which
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started with
much
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a much
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bigger city population of 15
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millions
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million
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in 2000, would obtain smaller numbers in 2025
according to
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prediction - only 88
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millions
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million
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in 2025. The second group of
onl
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only
one
one country - Indonesia -
starte
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started
start
in 2000 with 10 million
of
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apply
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urbans' residences. After that, it was
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a
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stable
increasing
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increase
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due to
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the two decades up to 2020, that Indonesia had reached the number of 30 million
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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urban citizens, and
due to
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the forecast,
thisnumber
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this number
the number
will stay unchanged in the future.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "due to".
Vocabulary: Replace the words millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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