The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summeries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summeries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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report derives from the above line graphs which enumerate the proportion of owning three different devices namely, fridge, vacuum, and washing machine. And the number of
hours
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spent on housework from 1920 to 2019 in a nation. As an initial overview, the most common appliance was the refrigerator. Not only is
this
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point clear, but
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, the time which was spent on house cleaning fell during the period. Notably, the percentage of having a fridge rocketed throughout the entire period until it reached a peak in 1980, 2000, and 2019, as it became 100%.
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, the vacuum cleaner had the same trend, but its peak was in 2000 and 2019.
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this
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point, 40% of families had a washing machine in 1920,
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the figure grew until 1960;
nevertheless
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, it reached a plateau which lasted from 1960 to 2019 except for a small dip in 1980.
Moreover
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, the number of cleaning
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was 50
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per week;
however
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, it dropped rapidly and became 20
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in 1960.
Next,
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it was unstable until it hit the nadir in 2019 with 10
hours
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only per week.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ownership
  • Electrical appliances
  • Households
  • Decrease
  • Increase
  • Correlation
  • Period
  • Adoption
  • Universal
  • Minimal
  • Significant
  • Early years
  • Mid-century
  • Modern era
  • Data trends
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