The chart below show the result of a survey of adult education. The fist chart shows the reasons why adult decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information show below.
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The bar graph illustrates information showing the reasons why young students want to pursue their education.
Whereas
, the pie chart represents how people plan to share the expenditure on each course.
On the whole, interest in a particular subject and gaining qualifications in their profession are the two main reasons that motivate students to study and the costs of each course should be majorly borne by the individuals.
To begin
with, Only about 9 per cent
of adults wanted to study in order to meet new people and make new friends. In contrast
, around 40 per cent
of adults decided to gain knowledge to build interest in a particular subject and to gain qualifications for their profession. Additionally
, about one-fifth of the total percentage of young students enjoy studying and are concerned about the prospects of promotion.
Shifting to the pie chart, it is apparent that the adults thought that the costs of each course would be borne by individuals and employers with 40 and 35 per cent
consecutively. Whereas
, taxpayers account for the smallest portion of about 25 per cent
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