In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, we can observe that kids have changed their customs in aspects

as

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such as

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food

consumption and physical exercise.

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essay will explain why many people claim that

this

scenario involves potential risks

for

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their health,

expousing

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exposing

the reasons why I partially agree with

this

belief.

Firstly

, it is interesting to notice that the new generations are eating more fast

food

than ever, considering that the scientific literature

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in holding a correlation

of

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this

trend

and health problems.

In contrast

, their parent's generation was nurtured under sharply different

habits

, developing a sense of the taste diverse and ample. Meanwhile, the new generations have opted for more

hyperpalatable

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hyper palatable

hyper-palatable

alternatives,

such

as burgers or pizza. The outcome of

this

is that never before we have consumed as

many

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fast

food

as today,

although

it can be partially explained by factors like the disposition of resources and the growth of

this

type of

food

industry. Unfortunately, the mentioned

trend

is complemented

with

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another negative new habit, namely, the decrease

of

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the

time

destined to

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playing sports amongst younger people. Probably, people in their thirties and forties are part of the

last

generation who played analogical games

and

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with mechanical toys.

Additionally

, the

time

spent

in

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exploring the natural environment has diminished dramatically for children. One of the main reasons behind

this

trend

has to do with the tendency

of replacing

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the

time

for playing outdoors with

time

for playing online.

Also

, it is true that many parents have less free

time

due to

their jobs

for

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playing with their children, which has had negative effects on the

habits

inherited from one generation to another.

To sum up

, the new generations are showing different

habits

,

being

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most of them risky for their health.

Nevertheless

, many other social transformations,

such

as the parent's leisure

time

decrease or the development of fast

food

industries, are impacting

on

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our context as a whole. For these reasons, I partially agree with the opinion which claims that the new

habits

amongst children are risky

,

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because have reduced the consumption of healthy foods and the physical effort, without forgiving the context where

this

trend

is happening.