The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the
number
of local catches and Use synonyms
imports
in Perth, Australia over a 10-year period. Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the Linking Words
number
of local catches Use synonyms
bigger
than Add a missing verb
is bigger
imports
. Use synonyms
Unit
are measured in metric Fix the agreement mistake
Units
tons
.
At the beginning of the period, local catch accounted Use synonyms
2677
metric Change preposition
for 2677
tons
Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
imports
Use synonyms
only
464.5 metric Add a missing verb
were only
tons
. The total Use synonyms
number
has significantly increased and doubled in 2007. Following that, in 2009, the total Use synonyms
number
of local Use synonyms
and
Correct word choice
apply
import
Fix the agreement mistake
imports
was
reached Unnecessary verb
apply
the
peak which approximately 9000 metric Correct article usage
a
tons
.
Looking at the figures, after 2009 local catches Use synonyms
was
slightly decreased which was only 6831,4 metric Unnecessary verb
apply
tons
. Use synonyms
However
, in the same year, the Linking Words
imports
still increase and remain the same until 2013. Use synonyms
At the end
of the period, the total was only 5814,7 and decreased by approximately 30% from its peak. It is Linking Words
also
the same for both Linking Words
imports
and local 5031,9 and 782,7 metric Use synonyms
tons
, respectively.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, imports, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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